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Words

Zsolt Kun

Photos

Lummi.ai

Date

2025.06.17

Crafting an Authentic Listing Story

How to sell more than square footage by telling the soul of a home.

There are two kinds of real estate listings.

One says:
“3 beds, 2 baths, updated kitchen, 1,800 sq ft.”

The other says:
“Designed in 1962 and bathed in natural light, this hillside retreat was built for a sculptor who believed every room should feel like a studio.”

Guess which one makes people lean in?

In a market full of bullet points and buzzwords, an authentic listing story is what makes a home unforgettable. Especially when the property in question has character—design pedigree, original details, or architectural intent. These homes aren’t just “on the market.” They’re works of art with backstories, moods, and moments waiting to be felt.

Here’s how we help those stories come to life.

Start with the Soul, Not the Specs

Yes, square footage matters. But it’s not the hook.

Before we talk numbers, we talk narrative:


  • Who built this home—and why?

  • What moments has it seen?

  • How does it feel when you enter on a winter morning or at golden hour?

  • What makes it different from everything else out there?

Great homes are personal. Your listing should be too.

Identify the Lead Character

Every home has a hero. It might be the floating fireplace, the sunken living room, the cantilevered roofline, or the way the walnut paneling wraps the space like a warm coat.

We choose one central idea and let the rest support it.

Example:

“At the heart of the home is a double-sided concrete hearth—anchoring open-plan living and inviting quiet evenings by the fire.”

We’re not listing features. We’re building scenes.

Use Design-Literate Language

Mid-century and design-focused buyers are fluent in aesthetics. They don’t want fluff. They want to know:


  • Is this a true post-and-beam structure?

  • Were the original built-ins preserved or restored?

  • What materials were used—and are they real?

  • What was updated, and how was it updated?

Details matter. Saying “open kitchen with premium finishes” doesn’t cut it. Say “walnut cabinetry, quartz countertops, and flush-mounted Gaggenau appliances hidden behind pivot doors.” That’s the difference between generic and specific—between overlooked and irresistible.


A man in a stylish room

Paint a Lifestyle, Not Just a Room Count

Buyers want to imagine themselves in the space. What do Sunday mornings feel like? What’s the view from the breakfast nook? Could you work from the garden studio?

“Open the sliding glass wall and let the breeze carry in the scent of pine. With coffee in hand, you step barefoot onto the flagstone patio as the sun warms the adobe walls.”

It’s a sensory experience—not just a sale.

Layer in the Backstory (If It’s Honest)

Was the home architect-designed? Built for a musician? Passed down through a family with care?

If it adds authenticity, include it. These aren’t just facts—they’re narrative anchors.

“Commissioned in 1971 by a local jazz pianist, the home’s proportions reflect both rhythm and restraint.”

Even if the buyer rewrites the next chapter, they’ll appreciate the richness of the one before.

Keep It Grounded

An authentic listing story is not over-the-top or flowery. It’s not about exaggeration—it’s about translation.

Your goal is to reveal the value behind the materials, the thought behind the layout, the feeling behind the design. No superlatives. Just thoughtful observation.

Final Thoughts

The best homes don’t sell themselves—they invite connection. And the best listings don’t just describe—they translate.

In a world of fast-scroll real estate, a clear, honest, beautifully written listing story cuts through the noise. It elevates your home, speaks directly to the right buyer, and turns curiosity into love.

Because when a home has soul, the story should too.